Friday, May 4, 2012

Lives Intersecting

I walk each morning to the subway since circumstances (weather, after-work obligations) have not allowed me to commute by bike (oh so sad.)  Sometimes alone, sometimes with Tyler, I cross the footbridge, wait at the long light as cars zip by, pass the Quaker School, watch children spill from the yellow buses, take First Place, see the dog who engages in a strange ritual of rubbing his body along the stone wall while his owner patiently waits, reach the next intersection with its steady traffic of moving taxi cabs, creep under the low branched canopy of leaves, zig zig from one Place to the next Place and descend underground.

It is the same each day and the characters in the space do not change.  There is the redhaired woman caught in a puff of cigarette smoke. The raspy-voiced man who shines shoes.  The soft-spoken, never-pushy transgendered panhandler at the corner. The bespectacled twins with their robot backpacks, flanking their sibling's stroller, as their petite mother pushes, traipses, along.

And at each intersection, there is a crossing guard. There is the frizzy-haired no-nonsense woman at the most dangerous corner, who we have determined has the hardest post, who is not happy when Tyler darts across the street, who says Hello only sometimes and even then is straight-faced, tight-lipped.

There is the quiet hat-wearing woman at the next corner who we have determined has the easiest post and so it matches her tame personality, the sweet rolling r's of her Spanish language, her small stature.

There is the wild woman at the next T, who wears a giant puffy down coat that reaches her ankles, even in warm weather, who talks incessantly, sings Hello to every child, tells me she's a 'summer baby' (thus the coat), who has yelled at me for the way I brazenly walk into traffic (though it is not quite that way, it is the cars who are not following the rules), and who is often so engaged in gossip and conversation that she fails to notice the traffic light has changed.

This morning, Tyler and I walked through all this.  I mentioned that, once, my schedule had been so that I had taken the route in the afternoon, as school let out.  I was surprised that the same crossing guards were there.

"What do you think they do in between?  For those four hours or so?"

"They go to the coffee shop. They blog," Tyler teased. (In Tyler's world, everybody blogs.)

"Right," I agreed. "About us.  About how bad we are at crossing the street."

We envisioned them at the wobbly stools, laptops at the counter, their blog header featuring each of them in their reflector vests, arms crossed in an X with the title: CROSS THIS.

10 comments:

  1. Ha, this is such a beautiful description! I wouldn't mind the walk to the subway if it were like this. :)

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  2. Wonderful! Love it! Isn't the human race just fantastic. I am sure that you have plenty of new characters there ... for another novel .... one day!

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  3. This is so great. I love the picture you have painted!!

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  4. What a great story! Little details like that bring fiction to life. The fact that it's real makes it so great :D

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  5. This is very descriptive, full of details that make it interesting, plus a touch of humor. Makes for an enjoyable post!

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  6. Lovely post, Melissa! I've often marveled at the lives I intersect with here in my small town--people who don't know that I'm watching...wait, now I sounds like a talker, but you get the point...:)

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  7. That is something I don't get out here in the land of housing tracts where everybody drives everywhere. (People will even drive from one end of the parking lot to the other, rather than walk the distance between two adjacent stores. And probably park in the fire lane, because the walk from the parking spaces is too far.)

    No human intersection happening here. :(

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  8. This was absolutely beautiful ... and hilarious at the end. I was right there with you, all the way! (Now I'm drooling to read your books.)

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  9. You do such a good job in creating a picture with your words...

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